Our DP came into our class and was talking to us about treating your writing as if it was gold, she said if you read your writing weather its short or long read it as if it was gold. She shared a slide with the whole class and we wrote poems using our 5 senses and 2 I wonder questions, this is my poem.
The thing I liked about Mr Herlihy's adventure was the fact that he stood at the exact place that the ANZAC's landed in 1915. I was so amazed because 100 hundred years from then there were legends who took over the grounds and trenches, the funniest thing about Mr H's adventure was that the we thought the trenches would be miles away from each other but he showed us a photo of these two trenches that were just 2 metres apart. The creepy thing about Mr H's adventure was that the ocean was then covered all in blood, the even more creepier thing about it was that no one know where the blood went, it left me very clueless.
