Our DP came into our class and was talking to us about treating your writing as if it was gold, she said if you read your writing weather its short or long read it as if it was gold. She shared a slide with the whole class and we wrote poems using our 5 senses and 2 I wonder questions, this is my poem.
that amazign
ReplyDeleteMalo Mone,
ReplyDeleteWow! What a great piece of writing. I'm particularly impressed with your first sentence "spine tingling bullets". Those words give me chills down my spine.
Keep up the great work.
Malo Aupito
Mrs Faalili